A fellow playwright whose advice is impeccable helped nail one aspect i’d been trying to bring out… how to rationalize Vera running instead of staying put and trusting the system. There’s something fishy about it, they way they won’t admit how much damage the rebellion is really doing, won’t even allow the rebellion ten minutes onscreen. Her mention of the Rebellion is censored. The society they live in, despite its benefits and amazing possibilities, is also built on lies and death. There are a couple of possible atrocities they could commit. Sacrificing Mortals to add to their extant virus information – so they can track viruses across the Cities… that’s one possibility. Or perhaps there’s a worse, 22nd century form of genocide. Well that’s a happy thought. How cheery this play is. It’s just non-stop wads of cheer.
Creative stuff. To enjoy.